Debut Submission Success with YA Author Bethany Crandell

Before I jump into today’s interview – the winner of the Non-YA Giveaway was Amanda Ray!

If there’s one thing that many aspiring writers have few clues about, it’s the submission process. There are good reasons for that; authors aren’t exactly encouraged to talk in detail about our own submission experiences, and – just like agent hunting – everyone’s story is different.

I managed to cobble together a few non-specific questions that some debut authors have agreed to answer (bless them). And so I bring you the submission interview series – Submission Hell – It’s True. Yes, it’s the SHIT.

Today’s SHIT guest is a special friend of mine. Bethany Crandell slogged through the query trenches right alongside me, celebrated with me when I crawled on out, and then kept on slogging. We all know slogging makes one weary, but this slogger slogged it out. Bethany emerged with an agent and a deal for her debut SUMMER ON THE SHORT BUS, which will be available from Running Press in 2014.

Cricket Montgomery was born with a golden spoon in her mouth (though Tiffany platinum would have been preferred) and the narcissistic notion that the world revolves around her. After a botched party attempt at the country-club lands her in hot water with her rarely-present father, it’s bye-bye relaxing Hawaiian vacation, hello attitude-adjustment as a summer camp counselor.

As if being left for dead in western Michigan with limited cell coverage isn’t punishment enough, Cricket’s horror increases when she realizes she’s working at a camp for disabled teens. Thankfully there’s one bright spot in handicapped hell; fellow counselor and Zac Efron lookalike Quinn, who Cricket falls head over heels for. Unfortunately for Cricket, Quinn is the one person who offers her the brutal truth about the kind of person she really is–and not even a platinum spoon can make ‘self-centered, bitch’ taste good.

As wheelchairs, lazy eyes, and slurred speech begin to threaten her sanity, Cricket finds herself relying on the unlikely friendships she makes with the campers, and the strange connection the camp’s director seems to have to her forgotten past.

BBC: How much did you know about the submission process before you were out on subs yourself?

BC: Thanks to one of my best pals allowing me fly-on-the-wall access to her sub process, I knew a fair amount. However, it’s a lot like the first few weeks of sleep deprivation after you bring your newborn baby home from the hospital. People warned you you’d be tired, but until you’ve experienced it first hand—no warning does it justice.

BBC: Did anything about the process surprise you?

BC: I was surprised by how incredibly kind the editors were. We received a handful of rejections, but they were all lovely and encouraging. One actually made me cry! It turns out editors are not dream crushing trolls after all.

BBC: Did you research the editors you knew had your ms? Do you recommend doing that?

BC: Hello. My name is Bethany and I’m an internet stalker.

You bet I did. I am a control freak. Since I was on the sidelines waiting while Rachael communicated with the editors, Googling, Twitter-stalking and PM browsing were about the only things I could do that allowed me to feel like I was still a part of the experience. I’m not sure that it got me anywhere, but it did give me a sense of purpose. I wouldn’t not recommend doing it. I think you need to do whatever works for you to get through the process. (For the record, I never Google Earthed anyone. I had to draw the line somewhere).

BBC: What was the average amount of time it took to hear back from editors?

BC: It varied. Some were as little as three weeks, others had it several months and never replied even after we got the offer from Running Press. I’m sure there are a ton of things that factor into their response time. Current lists, how full their in-box is, how many people in-house have to read…basically, too many to count. I tried not to fixate on the spurts of radio silence, but when you’re a big communicator, like I am, that wasn’t easy.

BBC: What do you think is the best way for an author out on submission to deal with the anxiety?

BC: Write, if you can focus long enough to do so, and talk to people. I wouldn’t have survived submissions without my author pals there to cheer me on, boost me up, and let me vent. Other writers are your greatest resource—utilize them!

BBC: If you had any rejections, how did you deal with that emotionally? How did this kind of rejection compare to query rejections? 

BC: Whether you’re agent hunting or searching for a publishing home, rejections suck–period. The difference this time around is that I wasn’t taking the hits by myself. Rachael, my agent, was fielding the blows, too. Knowing I had someone who believed in my book as much as I did made the passes a lot less painful.

BBC: If you got feedback on a rejection, how did you process it? How do you compare processing an editor’s feedback as compared to a beta reader’s?

BC: I had a little spreadsheet where I tracked the date our query went out, when the material was requested, as well as any feedback they provided. Again, it made me feel like I had a little bit of control in the situation. (The stupid things we writers tell ourselves.) Thankfully, the worst feedback we received was completely subjective. (Subjective. That word gives me the shivers.) I think I’d have fallen on the floor and assumed the fetal position had there been something negative.

As far as the differences between betas & editors; it was hard, but I tried to remind myself that editors are looking for more than just a well-crafted book. They need something that’s going to sell. As much as market trends can hurt authors, that’s just the way it works. Editors gotta eat, too.

BBC: When you got your YES! how did that feel? How did you find out – email, telephone, smoke signal? 

BC: Here’s the scenario: Ten minutes after I hung up the phone with my agent the phone rang again. I glanced at the display and saw it was her number. My initial thought was, “OH CRAP! Something really bad is happening. Why is she calling me again?” After a deep breath I picked up the phone…

ME: “Hello?”
AGENT: “Are you sitting down?”
ME: “Uh…”
AGENT: “They’re going to make an offer today.”
ME: Absolute silence immediately followed by hysterical, bordering on scary, laughter. “Shut up! Are you serious? Don’t lie to me ‘cause you know I can’t handle that today.”

The rest is a lovely blur. It took several days for the reality of what was happening to sink in. In fact…it’s still sinking in. Sometimes I’ll be doing something totally brainless like sitting at a stoplight or packing the girls’ lunches and it will hit me, MY BOOK IS GOING TO BE ON A SHELF—IN A BOOK STORE! And then I break into the giggles again.

BBC: Did you have to wait a period of time before sharing your big news, because of details
being ironed out? Was that difficult?

BC: Thankfully, my editor contacted me within two or three days to let me know it was safe to let the cat out of the bag. The cat is now perched on a very tall mountain with a megaphone mewing like a lunatic!

15 thoughts on “Debut Submission Success with YA Author Bethany Crandell

  1. Thanks so much for this interview, you two! Bethany, not only do I appreciate your answers to the “mysterious” submission process, I'm also encouraged by your story. : )

  2. Woo-hoo!!! What a lovely surprise to log on to the computer this morning and see Bethany's SHIT on your blog, Mindy (wow, that sounds so wrong). Great job, ladies!!

  3. Love this interview…Mindy…you are the Sh…well…you are. :)You are too Bethany! Great job girls. Very informative and made me laugh!

  4. This is the best SHIT I've read on the internet today. You girls nailed this interview!

    Bethany you had me laughing inappropriately like usual 🙂 Thanks for sharing your submission details with us! I can't wait to get my grubby little hands on your book!!!!

  5. Great interview. I've been following Bethany's story for so long – it's so nice to hear a positive outcome!!! I can't wait to read this book….SUMMER sounds like my type of bitchy main character 🙂 Although I do have to say…it's gonna be very confusing for me to read a male guy named Quinn. I have a few college girlfriends named Quinn. LOL! But Zac Efron look alike? that i can handle 🙂

  6. Rook – you're a spreadsheet girl? You mean to tell me there is hidden organization under that gorgeous mayhem-hair? Who knew!? Love your SHIT! Congrats!

  7. BBC, I love this SHIT. All your SHIT is awesome, but I've got a soft spot in my heart for Rook <3 (if ever I need an acronym, I'm comin' to you for help! lol)

    Rook, you rock! I'm so proud of you and can't wait to meet you in person!

  8. Wow! I never would have imagined MY SHIT would be so well received. (My parents always said I was special)

    @Tonya. Thanks for your super kind words. Knowing that one person finds it encouraging–makes it all worthwhile. (…and cue the violins) 🙂

    @Angela. Hello cupcake! I'm so glad my SHIT was the well received welcome mat to your day.

    @Suzanne. Mindy and I wear SHIT well, I agree.

    @AG. Aw…my heart song. You take enough of my SHIT on a daily basis–it's only fair someone else get to have a turn.

    @Maniscalco. Inappropriate laughter makes the world a better place. As does name calling. (behind backs or in parenthesis, of course)

    @Rachel. Bitchy M/C's are the new black. And girls named Quinn are cooler than Zac Efron–that's just a fact.

    @Kaylie. Hey doll! Thanks for stopping by. I must confess, I have shared some very inappropriate things w/my agent. But, she's a good girl and keeps her lips seals. Client/Agent confidentiality and all that rot. heh.

    @Kathryn. For the record, I don't do formulas. Just sorting & auto sum. That's it–which is still pretty impressive considering the amount of hair on my head–that's a lot to hold up.

    @J.R. Thanks! I'm not particularly comfy on the interview couch but BBC makes everyone feel particularly welcome–especially us SHITters.

    @A.M. You've stolen an owl-sized piece of my heart, too. Our face-to-face has me all giggly!!!

  9. Many, many thanks to all of you who stopped by for a taste of my SHIT and of course to Mindy for hosting me.

    On a personal note, I just want to say that Mindy has been an amazingly supportive, encouraging, wise-counseling friend to me over the last year (and then some). Buy her book, follow this blog and sing her praises because she is a gem of a gal and deserves the world!!

  10. Yes, truly I am all the awesome things Bethany just said.

    But really even if I was a stone cold bitch, I'd still appreciate it if you buy by book 😉

    Thanks for coming on the blog Bethany!!!

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